I hope this doesn't sound bad or mean in anyway. I have read you manga up to this point and I think everything is great. the colored pages were really beautiful and colored very well. I only have to say is try to add more greys and blacks on the pages like this. I hope this helps ^^
naw it's cool, constructive criticism and all that. I'd like to work on other aspects of the comic too like not doing the empty line face thing. I've seen it done far too often and although these henchmen are minor characters I'd prefer it if they at least had generic similar faces than just lines.